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Ten Notes on Page 257

by leighton on January 16, 2019
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Hey look, page 257 is here! I tell you what, I’ve been thinking about/planning/dreaming of this page for, I don’t know, over a year, and I’m thrilled that it’s here. Let’s talk about it, shall we?
 


1. This page serves a few narrative purposes. It makes it clear how significant the opposition to the Ultimage is, it expands the scope of the fictional reality by bringing in characters from other times and places, and it ties together some plot threads—for instance, it makes it clear how Beowulf came from ancient Scandinavia to Swann Castle. Mostly, though, this page is self-indulgent. I get that. I’m trying to put all the self-indulgence on one page and then go back to focusing on the story.   

2. Planning this page took more back-and-forth communication than usual. First I had to decide which characters to include; my original list was much longer, but there’s only so much space on the page, and the Leopard Women of Venus can show up another time. I figured six panels was the most we could fit, with the Super Team taking up the bottom row and the super-heroes having a wide panel at the top. I wrote descriptions of the characters and gathered reference material, and shared that with Sam, and sent her a crude sketch of how it could be laid out. Sam moved some things around and decided on the final order, and then got to work designing characters. I wrote the captions after I knew the order they’d go in.  

3. The costumed crime-fighters in the first panel are all real comic book characters from the 1940s. Specifically, they are Amazing Man, Black Terror, War Nurse, Lady Fairplay, and Bart “Daredevil” Hill. We already knew these heroes fought the Ultimage; Josh drew them on page 232. Aside from Bart Hill and Amazing Man, he chose the characters. Josh and I wrote notes about these guys in an earlier blog post.

4. The hobomancers are from a role-playing game called Hobomancer, which was created by Steve Johnson, Carter Newton, and me. The game was written by the three of us, Josh Burnett, and Colin Thomas, and published in 2012. It won the 2013 ENnie Silver Award for Best Electronic Book. I’ve worked on a lot of RPGs over the years, but Hobomancer’s the one I’m most proud of. If you’d like to read some hobomancer fiction, I highly recommend Carter’s novelSuicide’s Run: A Tale of the Hobomancers. We also published a Hobomancer Companion, written by Josh, and there’s lots of hobomancer stuff in our book American Artifacts . . . look, I warned you this was going to be self-indulgent.  

5. The Laser Ponies are also from an RPG, this one called, fittingly enough, Laser Ponies. I wrote it in 2009. Abi didn’t co-create the game, because she was a baby at the time, but she did help inspire it. Because of her, I wanted to make a game that was kid-friendly. Abi has since become a Laser Ponies fan, and she created characters that will go in the second edition, if I ever get around to writing it.

At some point I bought little plastic horse toys to use as miniatures for Laser Ponies conventions games, which led to Abi and me playing with the Laser Ponies, which inevitably led to them teaming up with the Super Team and visiting Swann Castle. So obviously they have to be on this page.

6. But enough about me! When I was planning this page, I wanted to include some other cartoonists’ characters, so I asked Clint Basinger for permission to include his character Mummynaut. Clint makes awesome comics, and out of his cast of colorful characters, Mummynaut seemed like the best fit. I mean, just look at this guy:


I can totally see him traveling across time and space to battle the Ultimage. You can order copies of Mummynaut, and other fine Cosmic Mustache comics, here!

7. Speaking of other people’s characters, I’ve mentioned before that Octopus Jones was created by Joseph Morris, and Joseph was very generous in allowing us to use Octopus Jones in our Swann Castle story. We already knew that OJ took part in the battle against the Ultimage, but it’s fun to see him in the same panel with Mummynaut and Space Blot.  I really like Octopus Jones. He’s just one of Joseph’s many, many characters; you should check out Cosminomicon and 7 Worlds, and also Joseph’s Patreon.

8. Space Blot is another one of my characters, created when I was in 5th grade, revived when I was in high school, re-revived again post-college, blah blah blah. He was a supporting character in the Fuzzball & Scuzzball web comic I used to draw. I’ve always liked him, and he’s small and easy to fit into a panel, so I thought, what the heck, I’ll include him, too. I’m glad I did, because it was awesome to see Sam draw him.  

9. I did not create the character of Beowulf. There was probably a person named Beowulf at some point, whose story was developed as part of an oral tradition, and then shaped into its final form by an anonymous poet. Thanks, anonymous Beowulf poet!

10. And finally, the Super Team. Here’s where it gets really self-indulgent, because the page ends on the Super Team, and they take up more space than anyone, and yet you’ve never heard of them, and it’s unclear why they’re important. They’re important because . . .

a.) My sister and I made up the Super Team when we were kids, circa 1984, in my grandmother’s house, and played with them every Sunday. I have many fond memories of those days.

b.) I introduced Abi to the Super Team, and she wanted to play with them, and we created many thrilling new adventures, including the one where they went to Swann Castle to fight Jason Occult.

c.) One time when Abi and I were playing, the Super Team traveled to another world and met a group of characters called the Electric Team. That’s right–the Electric Team is a spin-off of the Super Team. So if the Electric Team has their own comic series, their predecessors should at least get to appear in a panel. 

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Ten Notes on Page 256

by leighton on January 13, 2019
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Ten Notes on Page 256

Page 256 is available, and has been for several days!
 


1. I’ve been so busy this week that I kept forgetting to write a blog post about this page. Oops! Also, as I’ve mentioned, I’m running out of things to say for this part of the story, which is why last time I only had five notes. How will I make it to the end this time? Read on and see!

2. Panel 2 glosses over a series of conversations between Brianna and Jaxula. There’s a whole story you could tell here; I hope to someday tell it. For now, we just need to know that they talked.

3. Sam and I had a miscommunication about panel 3, I wanted it to show both Brianna and Jason, I feel like it’s a jarring transition with just showing a close-up of Jason. Abi tells me I should not worry about this.

4. In panel 5, the fellow on the left is Yarko the Great. I’ve written about him previously; he was created by the great Will Eisner, he appeared in comics in the 40s, and he previously appeared in a couple of pages of the Electric Team, specifically in the story “Time Troubles” that Josh Burnett illustrated. We already knew, from that story, that Yarko was involved in recruiting people to fight the Ultimage.

5. The guy in the middle is Skelman the Sorcerer, previously seen a few pages ago when Jason turned him into stone and stole his spellbook. His hair has grown out quite a bit since then. Not a lot of time has passed, so there’s probably some magical reason. As I mentioned in a post a few days ago, when I read Jim Starlin’s most recent graphic novel I decided I really wanted Skelman to have Adam Warlock hair.

6. When Sam first drew Skelman in this panel, he was wearing a different outfit, but I thought it was too much to change his hair AND his outfit, for a character who’s only previously appeared on one page, and we needed to keep him somewhat recognizable, so I asked her to change his outfit back. That new outfit she drew was cool, though. We should use it sometime.

7. The woman on the right is Gold Lady, who is a member of the Super Team. We’ll be talking more about the Super Team next week, so I’ll go into more detail then.

8. Hey, I’ve made it all the way to eight! Great! But now what? Oh, let’s talk about the next page . . .

9. Sam and I have been emailing back and forth about the next page, which will showcase the army alluded to in the last panel here. There are lots of characters to get right, it’s going to be complicated for her to draw, but it’s something I’ve been looking forward to for a long time, and I’m very excited for it. You should be excited for it, too! It may be relevant in certain ways to some of you reading this.

10. This is page 23 of 30 of “Brianna’s Story.” The end begins next week!  And I should have plenty of stuff to write about!

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Five Notes on Page 255

by leighton on January 2, 2019
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Ten Notes on Page 255

Page 255 is here! As we get near the end of Brianna’s Story, I’m afraid everything I have to say about this page is a repeat of something I’ve said before. Still, let’s get started and see where we end up.  


1. As I’ve said before, I’m glad I wrote the dialogue and stage directions and let Sam decide the panel layout, it was a surprise, but I like it. Sam reasoned that we have a few tight pages, with lots of panels and lots of characters, coming up, so she should use fewer panels on this page. Good thinkin’.

2. As before, the key to writing this part of the story was to realize that Jaxula isn’t the main character, he’s just a part of Brianna’s story. Still, I like this moment for Jaxula; it’s some of that “Show Don’t Tell” stuff, where instead of me just telling you Jax is a good guy, I show him hurling himself in front of someone he barely knows to take a bullet for her.

3. New to this installment, I really like Brianna’s face in that last panel. She’s all like, “No, I don’t care about you guys at all,” but you know she does.

4. So now Brianna’s confused, because Jaxula’s a really good guy, and it’s becoming more and more obvious that Jason is not. She hasn’t had a really strong grasp of right and wrong–her parents sold her into servitude at a young age, she hasn’t had a lot of time to study ethics, okay?

5. I’m torn, because on the one hand I really like talking about the formal choices we made, and the process, and on the other hand I don’t like giving away stuff about the characters in the story or what my intentions are. What would David Lynch think about giving notes on a page like this?

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